Thursday, March 4, 2010

Regarding Formal Exclusion

Scott (who is just leaving now for Lexington and may not be available to spot this) wrote a great post on Monday entitled Formal Exclusion that argued that formal experimentation keeps away older, blue-collar audiences:
I'm tired of inwardly blanching when one of the housekeeping staff in our building asks what the play is about and whether they would like it. I don't like seeing the expressions of bafflement and disappointment on the faces of so many who leave a performance. I don't like the way these plays seem to tacitly filter out all but the educated. I want to find ways to reach everybody, not just the educated, not just the wealthy, and not just the city dwellers. I seek a profound theatre that enriches everybody, not just people who have as much education as I have. Wallace's play took the working class experience seriously, the small town experience seriously, but she couldn't write for them -- she had to signal that, while she was on their side, she is still a member of the intelligentsia, the artist-specialist class. And this seems sad to me. With so few people who can write from experience of these issues, it seems a lost opportunity and a shame.
Matt Freeman responded by throwing down the gauntlet:
If you don't see something to enjoy in the plays being written today, that doesn't mean you are excluded. It just means that today's playwrights don't speak to you. There are lots and lots of plays that will, or have, I'm sure. Be patient, read the things you love, and stop prescribing your taste to other people.Plays aren't written to order. I read the frustration in posts like these, and I understand it. But there's only really one solution if you feel that a certain play that should exist that does not already. Write it.
Mac Rogers and Don Hall respond in similar vein, rounded up in an excellent and thoughtful post by Scott where he does something very hard -- he listens to his critics and hears the truth in what they're saying.

I do want to point out that what Scott originally said was not necessarily directed at playwrights (although responses such as 99 Seats' seem to have interpreted it as such). To the degree that Scott's post was directed at playwrights, yes, the response should be "just write." But I don't think that was the whole lesson. I think there was something to be said for the people who select work for production, more than for the people who write work.

Now, I don't know enough to generalize whole-sale, so let me just talk from my personal perspective for a moment.

MY EXPERIENCE AS A PRODUCER
Even at a very small, new company like mine, there is a flood of ideas coming along. They range from someone wanted to adapt Kipling's stories for children to a devised-work idea for dealing with the implications of Dick Cheney's authorization of torture. Ideas are competing for our time and resources.

If a play is written in a traditional structure, it often becomes compared to the works that precede it. A play I've written that features two men after the apocalypse of the world, one of whom is gay and in love with the other, inevitably draws comparison with Waiting for Godot (occasionally, it will earn Endgame or Rosencrantz and Guildenstern are Dead both of which are slightly less obvious but slightly more accurate). In a way, the play suffers some degree of disadvantage of seeming like a clone of a more popular work.

In other words, to some extent, there is a bias towards formal exclusion because it gives you a better handle on the originality of the work, which is something that is absolutely key both in marketing the production externally, and generating excitement for the production internally (which are, by the way, largely the same process).

I am still in the process of putting up Hamlet. (Tickets are still available, but we had a full house last night so it will get harder to get tickets at the door) In a different way, I had a sort of "inward blanch" like the one Scott talks about, only in this case it was when I tried to explain to theater people why we chose Hamlet. I still believe strongly in our production (which examines grief through the inability to express grief, features one of the most stunning performances by the girl who plays Hamlet and an Ophelia who solves the Ophelia Problem), but I could see skepticism on the faces I spoke to.

If you say "We're just going to do a good Hamlet," people are not going to give a shit (generally). If you say "We're going to do a good Hamlet with Patrick Stewart as Claudius and Robert Pattinson as Hamlet," you have their attention. But if you're a small company with a lack of star actors, then formal experimentation may be the hook you need.

This isn't to say that formal experimentation is just a marketing ploy. It is also about the excitement. It may be hard to rally a group of independent actors around a flag like "Let's do a play about two people who fall in love!" You may be able to if the script is genius enough, but it will be harder.

Also, plays that experiment formally have a tendency to pop off the page more when I read them -- this might be a personal thing, but I know that sometimes when it comes to dramatic realism, I can't tell if it is actually good until I see actors inhabit the scenes for weeks, and wear it like a good cloak. Is it two-dimensional, or obscuring a deeper sinister vibe? Is the dialogue stilted, or is it a unique voice? (The movie Serenity, for instance, has dialogue that feels really jerky and stilted for the first ten minutes and then suddenly becomes an irreplacable part of the movie).

MY EXPERIENCE AS A DIRECTOR
This is almost certainly a personal preference, and reveals (avowedly), a weakness of mine, but it is this: as a director, I find it much easier to direct formally then to direct emotionally. I don't know if it is a function of my youth and inexperience, or if it is a function of my personal tastes for Brecht over Aristotle, but I find it easier to work visually and physically with actors than emotionally. That's part of the reason (listed above) that I'm drawn more to plays that have formal innovations over ones that have compelling emotional struggles. I may recognize that play is great on an emotional plane, but simply be uninterested in it.

(This reminds me of accounts of Bertold Brecht, rehearsing Galileo, cutting viciously from his own monologues shouting, "Who the hell is this incompetent, long-winded playwright?" much to the amusement of his cast.)

If other directors feel this way, it explains the ever-presence of the "Director's Interpretation." Sometimes the "Director's Interpretation" is a smash-hit, and other times it is roundly panned. I myself was in a Romeo and Juliet when I was in high school that was set in Kashmir, so that the Montagues where Muslim and the Capulets were Hindi. Friar Lawrence was still Catholic, which had an unintended subtext that wherever Westerners attempt to bring peace, they only bring death. The full extent of this interpretation was Indian costumes, and a Bollywood-style dance sequence at the party scene.

MY EXPERIENCE AS A PLAYWRIGHT
I guess what I'm saying is in the last two sections is that it is very possible that playwrights are writing plenty of non-formally-exclusive works (even young playwrights), and are not getting produced. And I know this because, well, I write non-formally-experimental works sometimes. And it doesn't get produced. Not even by me.

It is weird to talk about, but my tastes as a playwright and my tastes as a director/producer are now so far diverged that I will quite often write a play that I will not want to direct. Part of this has to do with the ol' "artist judging their own work" curmudgeon, but sometimes it simply is this: sometimes my work as a playwright stimulates a muscle that doesn't interest my directing brain. Which is fine. Maybe other people want to take them on.

But there's another facet from my experience as a playwright, which actually goes back to something that came up during the Outrageous Fortune debate. Isaac Butler talked about how we need to produce Playwrights' okay-to-good plays if we want to see more masterpieces. In a way, what he's talking about is being okay with the playwright as they develop from young artists to old established hands.

The example that got tossed around a lot was Tennessee Williams. And I think in this context he works pretty well. After all, the stuff we know him for is very powerful, but often it is very much mid-Twentieth Century realism. Not so for his younger plays. They are often quite odd, quite disturbing in a way that many of his later plays don't quite feel. Ditto for Sam Shepard, who wrote much weirder stuff than Fool for Love and True West.

If I look back on my history as a writer -- look back to the very beginning, it looks much like this:

At the age of 12, I began writing, and the first thing I tried to write was a novel, because that's what I was reading. The novels were set in video-games, and were basically my attempts to dramatize the hero I imagined that I was when I played video games. That's the story that was in my head.

At the age of 16, I first wrote a one-act play for our school's one-act festival. It was, for some perverse reason, a Commedia dell'Arte (which we had just learned about in class the week before) piece, set in an Office. It reads like a set of Dilbert strips, since that is basically my familiarity with offices at the time, being a huge Dilbert fan.

My next full length play was completed when I was 18. It was a realist piece set in the South, and beyond that I refuse to say another word because it was bad. Miserably bad. Miserably, miserably bad. "I hope copies never resurface in the inevitable anthologies of my life's work but secretly I know independent companies in Chicago will try to put it on in sixty years time and the reviews will all say 'Now we knew why Guy wanted it burned'" bad.

I stopped writing for a time. Then I went to a Beirut concert, and suddenly it made sense to me that you could create something beautiful without any words. I gave myself the formal experiment of trying to use absolutely no words. I failed in that experiment, but the failure of that experiment became the point of the piece. (This, by the way, is one of the few things I've ever written that I was excited to direct myself)

Since then, I have continued writing, lurching between plays that are classical naturalism and strangely broken experiments in form, or somewhere (either comfortably or uncomfortably) living in the middle.

I have no illusions that I am a great playwright. But I have a feeling that there's something about the development of a playwright that starts with imitation, then suddenly lurches to "How-do-I-prove-myself-different-from-everyone" experimentation.

Yet here may be the problem that Scott is noting. Because we right now have a system that burns out playwrights quickly. We produce a lot of young playwrights, but we often don't continue the support and development as maturity sets in over the length of a life-time. Even Bertold Brecht, right at the end of his life, conceded that the Epic Theater was youthful and one-sided, and began trying to work out what a dialectical theater that united so-called "Brechtian" methods with so-called "Aristotilian" methods.

TO CONCLUDE
So, my response to Scott's original post is basically that, indeed, telling playwrights not to exclude audiences by experimenting formally may be a lost cause. But there is some grain of truth to be extracted that there may be an over-emphasis on formal experimentation in programming of independent companies (almost over-compensating for the lack of experimentation in traditional venues).

And of course, let's not forget that what is considered "Formal experimentation" for one generation's blue-collar diverse audience may be the main-stream entertainment for the next generation. I believe you can draw a straight line from Theater of the Absurd to Monty Python to The Hangover.

Sunday, February 28, 2010

Court Commentary: United States v. Comstock ... In Verse

(My company's Hamlet is still running, with six shows next week. Tickets are still available, and I've already had one blog reader say hello!)

I wrote the following response to the Supreme Court case United States v. Comstock, because I was tired and I was waiting in the wings during Hamlet. There may be more in the future. You are warned.

SUMMARY
Respondent in this case is Comstock
Petitioner's United States
Defendent herein seeks to unlock
Comstock's cell and prison gates
Comstock's jailed for crimes of sex
Perpetrated years ago
To be release he should have been next
But the second jury's 'no'
Leaves the plaintiff jail'ed still
With to certain date to leave
His term is up but he's not done yet
So he feels he's been deceived
See, our Congress passed a statute
Creating one more step to get through
Before your jail bags can be packed
You must prove that you're no danger
That your term has fixed your mind
Convincing panel, judge, or juror
You've left sexual crimes behind
They quiz you on your deepest fancies
And you're lawbound to reply
And if they find your dreams abhorrent
Kiss your sweet release goodbye
They can, indeed, hold you forever
Civil commitment's the name of the fate
If they decide you still think evil
They won't tell you your go-home date

COMSTOCK
Comstock's case is quickest to recount
"My term is up, so let me free!
No matter what, I must be let out
And that's the way the law should be
Imagine if the gov could jail you
On the tiniest of charge
But on the final day detain you
Let your jail term slow grow large
The law mandates a term to start with
And judge confirms that at the trial
But if we say 'That's only part'
You could stay locked up for a while."

UNITED STATES
"But wait!" the U.S. seeks to argue
"What if perverts don't repent?
Should we release a rapist to you
If we think to crime he's bent?
Our job is, in a word, protection
Like doctors we can do no harm
while knowing he'll return to prediliction
The public will raise the alarm
We'll be blamed for missing ation
If we knew him, and released
There'd be no way to fix the damage
No resurrection for deceased
The process used by our parole board
To review the impact of freeing
Can, in these cases too, prove more
safe than just 'release and see'ing.
We are bound by higher calling
To protect and also serve
If we find his state appalling
He will get what he deserves."

IMPACT
The case has resonances, clearly
With other policies of late
The mind is drawn at once to Cuba
And the enemies of state
In other cases, courts have found
The Eigth Amendment must prevent
Incarceration stretching long
Though, there are some different features
To distinguish this from those
Detentions of the Bush Admin years
(Although those are just different clothes)
For instance, this detentions legal
inasmuch as there's a law
This isn't presidential fiat
In Guantan'mo's legal maw.
Secondly, there are review boards
Judges, juries, or a panel
Evidence must be looked over
Before a term is made so final

OPINION
For my part, I side with Comstock
On the issue of the term
How many viewings must we watch
Minority Report before we learn?
You see, a trial revolves around a crime,
Event, which happened in the past.
We ask, "prove so-so did this!"
That's a manageable task.
Here, however, crime is future
So begins a dicey game
Now we're talking just desire
Whether or not the beast's been tamed.
Can we know what folks will do
Years and years along the line?
And if the perp has disagreement
How to prove to us he's fine?
In this case, as with Gitmo,
Or police who use entrapment
Passing judgment on a person
Not one what a person's done
To paraphrase in verse from Franklin:
Want safety over liberty?
have none.

Thursday, February 25, 2010

Hamlet Opens Tonight!

Alright, so I'm poking my head out of the hiatus-land for a moment just to remind everyone that my theater company, Organs of State, is performing Hamlet starting tonight. Seriously, buy a ticket or come find us at the Paradise Factory at 64 E 4th St. in Manhattan. It'll give you something to do that's out of the cold, and is genuinely fun.

Seriously, this is not only a really brilliant staging of Hamlet, but it's actually fun. You'll spend as much time laughing as you will thinking.

Oh, and not to toot my director's horn too hard, but I think he's solved The Ophelia Problem.

And if you do come see it, say hello to me in the Box Office! And I'd love to hear your feedback afterwards or read it online as comments on this post or posts on your own blog!

Thursday, February 18, 2010

Hiatus

Alright, I feel pretty bad. I made a call to the community for ideas, and I haven't been able to return to it, and I've been just doing some fluffy posting since then because I'm busy. My life just took another crazy turn yesterday, and I need to focus on Hamlet (buy tickets! buy tickets!)

I'm going to be on hiatus officially until March 6th, which is when Hamlet closes. And when I get back, I'm going to deal substantively with the stuff that I've bookmarked. Particularly, I've got my eye (and you should too), on 99 Seats, who's hit the mark on a great run of posts lately. And I owe Lionel Frumpton a considered response too.

Anyways, I'll either see you folks in March... unless you come see Hamlet and introduce yourself to me.

Tuesday, February 16, 2010

Why We Do What We Do, Pt III

So, I listen to science podcasts when I get the chance, and one of the things that is most fascinating to me in the scientific world is how much there is to be interested in. Seriously. Today's episode of Quirks and Quarks included someone who sequenced the genome of an extinct human being, someone who studied whether six month old babies who can read our intentions, and someone who studied the tentacled snake to figure out why it has tentacles. Oh, and a Canadian astronaut who spent six months in space.

And then there was This American Life's 400th episode, where they let their parents pitch stories to follow up on -- and they wound up covering a car, the Erie Canal, a near-destroyed university in Haiti, the humor of death, and corporate personhood.

What it reminds me is that we, as artists, have so much potential to do work about. In the same way that scientists can find out interesting and cool stuff about any number of obscure creatures or beings, we can find ourselves in an unlimited sea of ideas and possibilities.

It's on my mind because my theater company is in the process of figuring out what we're doing for the next year (as for this year, come see our production of Hamlet that opens next week!). And I guess there's a lot of ink that has been spilled over how plays are selected, but I'm interested in the independent theater from the DIY crowd -- how do they select ideas?

What's the general process? Are there tendencies in terms of what we're drawn into taste-wise? How much do we draw inside of our own organization, and how much do we draw from outside? When we draw from outside, how much do we take in from strangers and how much do we take from acquaintances? What is our prime focus? Is it finding something new? A unique structure? Something that seems topical or immediate? Something that leaps off the page as being well-made? Something that accomplishes the mission statement? Something that you can striking home for your audience? Something that you imagine will be fun to do?

I'm thinking of stumbling my way towards making this a survey of some kind. Not just a collection of anecdotes, but something--if not 100% empirical, but something to look at trends in DIY theater season-making.

Monday, February 15, 2010

Really?


I feel like this is so very charmingly naive on the part of Hulu. Will I put a little of my time to help with the better distribution of advertising? Sure, Hulu. I'd love to.


(I seriously do plan to return to posting things of actual cultural significance soon, but I read all of Lyotard's The Postmodern Condition and What is Postmodernism? in one weekend, and the heady postmodernist theory has made my brain cloudy and brought out innate aggression towards children in me, so I'm taking a breather before I return to what I do).

Why We Do What We Do, Pt. II

Sometimes I get discouraged trying to explain to people what I do. I wish that I could say I was in a field that really created something tangible and, well, cool. In short, I wish I had invented the mosquito-killing laser beam: